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Blogs > Thoreau1947 > Poet's Paradise


Thoreau1947 79M
660 posts
4/22/2007 7:48 am

Last Read:
4/23/2007 9:36 am
Reminders of You

From deep within my breath escapes as I whisper your name and in the summer wind I feel your gentle touch upon my face.

I feel your kisses on my skin when the rain falls upon me turning my face to the sky so as to feel those kisses on my lips.

The sweet scent of your female fragrance overtakes my senses and I reel, this being but a reflex reaction to those loving memories retained.

At the mere thought of you my heart skips a beat and then another and my mind quickly wonders if you also might be thinking of me?

When night descends I feel your presence upon my loving bed, and therein my heart heals, my soul soars, I am free, and peace is mine.

-Richard

amazinggrace1954 72F

4/22/2007 9:04 am

 Your prose is lovely, I could feel your words, like it is supposed
to be. Thank you for sharing this Richard~so incredibly heartfelt..


Thoreau1947 79M

4/22/2007 9:18 am

 Thank you, amazinggrace, for the positive
feedback...always good to be validated by
our peers...

Richard


LapKittie 64F

4/22/2007 9:47 am

 hhmmm .. I love the word picture "loving bed" .. very nice overall.


Rocketship 82F
19001 posts
4/22/2007 9:56 am

 Hi Thoreau,
You have expressed in words what I've been feeling in my heart!
Thank you for sharing!
I will add this to my 'Thought Journal' if you don't mind.
Take care!


BarbieRocks 81F

4/22/2007 11:02 am

 Hmmmm....someone is going to be wanting an OBE

My meditations never seemed to go in that direction but with MY vivid imagination I'd be in BIG trouble if I was able....


Thoreau1947 79M

4/22/2007 11:15 am

 Thank you for the feedback, LapKittie
and Rocketship. Glad you liked the
work...

Richard


KismetTouch 76F

4/22/2007 1:11 pm

 OH MY, THIS POEM WOULD CERTAINLY WOO
ANY WOMAN
LEAVING HER BREATHLESS
BRAVO RICHARD
SIMPLY AMAZING
We are the leaves of one branch, the drops of one sea, the flowers of one garden.


Thoreau1947 79M

4/22/2007 1:45 pm

 kismet, thank you for the compliment.
Some say we forever do a mating dance,
and I suppose poets do that also...

Richard


Thoreau1947 79M

4/22/2007 6:59 pm

 Thank you for the feedback, Tears.
Everything in good time...

Richard


Thoreau1947 79M

4/23/2007 9:36 am

 Hi kitkat. Thank you for the feedback.
I don't know that memories are fantasies.
I think that if someone has strong enough
memories,some things are bound to be
relived. Glad you liked this.

Richard




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