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Blogs > Thoreau1947 > Poet's Paradise


Thoreau1947 79M
660 posts
4/9/2007 2:20 am

Last Read:
4/10/2007 3:51 am
Doubting Our Very Eyes

Let fog be thick in time that fog will lift
made clear the skies for everyone to see
if now and then a darkness that will drift
across the way that troubles you and me.

The muddled mind deferring what it will
confusion reigns disturbing every dream
usurped the peace such anguish to instill
one lies awake so no one hears a scream.

A gauzy gray descending with the dawn
bewilderment will haunt one for a spell
while still such rungs upon that echelon
the soul will swear it’s in the pits of hell.

Let fog be thick in time that fog will rise
but for awhile we’ll doubt our very eyes.

April 9, 2007

KismetTouch 76F

4/9/2007 4:39 am

 Amazing...I wrote a poem titled the Fog as well
dealing with the same thing

I really enjoy your poetry
It definately has meaning for me
Thankyou
We are the leaves of one branch, the drops of one sea, the flowers of one garden.


Thoreau1947 79M

4/9/2007 5:35 am

 Thank you, Kismet, for your
feedback. Writing about the
same thing happens a lot...

Richard


Rocketship 82F
19001 posts
4/9/2007 7:29 am

 Hi Thoreau,
I enjoy reading your poems out loud.
They have a calming/relaxing effect on me.
Take care!


Thoreau1947 79M

4/9/2007 9:06 am

 Thank you, Rocketship. I do readings
and have been told that I calm the
room, which is interesting...

Richard


Thoreau1947 79M

4/10/2007 3:51 am

 Thank you again, artful.
Richard




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