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As Well A Seer  

RickieDee
10/30/2009 7:45 am
The baton twirls inside her precious hand
the dream alive that's set her heart ablaze
far more afoot than some might understand
who'd see in this a child that merely plays.

She's in her stride and discipline is key
a quickened pulse a stimulating surge
so deftly done the draft is destiny
and that itself is what instills the urge.

Somewhere in time a woman will be grown
made way for things now absent at this stage
but there and then she'll come into her own
tomorrow's tome that borrows from this page.

The baton twirls to sparkles in her eyes
as well a seer for what that signifies.

-Richard
lothringia
4561 posts 

10/30/2009 9:22 am

Another GEM !

RickieDee
791 posts 

10/30/2009 2:02 pm

Hi lothringia. Thank you for the positive
feedback. Glad you liked the poem.

Richard

DaydreamBelievr2
473 posts

10/31/2009 5:58 am

Wow - this is great and truly a 'gem' as Loth acknowledges.....

Richard, it is lovely to see you and I hope that your respite brings that which is beneficial.

The beautiful metamorphosis unfolds brilliantly before our eyes as your poem works its 'immediate' magic thus heightening our perception in the most delightful manner....

All the best, Richard, and thank you.....Dianne

RickieDee
791 posts 

10/31/2009 12:22 pm

Hi Dianne. Thank you so much for the positive and validating
feedback. In the past few months, I have not had the time or
energy to write much (compared to the norm), but soon as I
re-energize poems seem to appear. Glad you like the work and
take the time to say so. All the best to you also.

As always,

Richard

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