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The Trembling Hand  

RickieDee
10/23/2009 4:07 am
The trembling hand can speak of many things
a fear induced that causes you to shake
an anger felt with what that anger brings
a loving link that makes your body quake.

If fear induced your hand will shake until
you take a stand and face that mighty foe
and say of this you've finally had your fill
and thus its grip has truly got to go.

While anger felt can cripple you awhile
it's borne in you to master your domain
this artless urge to usher down the aisle
till calm alone your corridor contains.

The loving link now that's a different call
for that you'd opt to tremble overall.

-Richard
Rocketship
2650 posts

10/23/2009 6:13 am

Thank you for this! Well said!!

RickieDee
791 posts 

10/23/2009 7:13 am

Hi Rocketship. Thank you for the positive feedback
on this work. Glad you liked it...

Richard

SouthernWoman04
836 posts 

10/23/2009 9:18 am

Lovely!!

RickieDee
791 posts 

10/23/2009 10:53 am

Hi SouthernWoman04. Thank you very much
for the feedback on this work.

Richard

DaydreamBelievr2
473 posts

10/23/2009 12:11 pm

Wow - this is fantastic, Richard....

We have all 'run the emotional gamut', as it were, and this insightful work encapsulates it in your phenomenal poetic manner!!

Richard, I have spent a delightful time today visiting The Poet's Place and again I wish to say a most heartfelt "Thank you"....

Sincerely with all my best for inner peace and the tools that enable you to make the proverbial journey.....Dianne

RickieDee
791 posts 

10/23/2009 2:03 pm

Hi Dianne. Thank you so very much for such a kind and
validating feedback. It is people like you who fuel and
sustain my passion for writing. Today, I wrote several
poems and will endeavour to share some of those as conditions
allow...

Richard

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